Jul 31, 2013

Love and Mystery


Love

She sat in corner, sobbing continuously for two hours without telling the reason, but when I tried to console her she shooed me away like she would shoo away snoopy when he would irritate her too much, “Shit!” it suddenly stuck me that snoopy was missing, today was the day they took him away.

Mystery

I had been trying to find my diary for hours without success and I was getting really worried when I saw that it had slipped off behind bookshelf, alas! Those two important pages were missing and I turned to see there she was, holding those two pages where I poured my feelings for her.


Above posts are attempt to write a 55 fiction in one sentence based on the guidelines provided at writetribe. I will highly appreciate the critical reviews.
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24 comments:

  1. Sreedev SomanJuly 31, 2013 at 2:31 PM

    Wow that's beautifully carved Sugandha...I liked both...both of them have a different tinge of reality...

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  2. Vidya SuryJuly 31, 2013 at 2:36 PM

    Great job, Sugandha! What I love is you've done both in one sentence each!

    :-)

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    1. sugandhaJuly 31, 2013 at 2:38 PM

      Thank you Vidya. I really didnt think this highly of the work. I feel happy now.

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  3. Writefully YoursJuly 31, 2013 at 4:57 PM

    Great work with just 55 words!

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  4. Bhavya NJuly 31, 2013 at 5:06 PM

    Wonderfully 55 fictioned Sugandha! Loved it totally!! :)

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  5. Grace Grits and GardeningJuly 31, 2013 at 6:47 PM

    Great job! Loved both.

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  6. AnonymousJuly 31, 2013 at 7:36 PM

    Nice just in 55 words :)

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  7. Debbie D. July 31, 2013 at 8:42 PM

    Impressive to use only one sentence like that! Both gripping stories. :-)

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  8. kalpana solsiJuly 31, 2013 at 9:45 PM

    Writing F-55 is tough and you have managed it with ease.

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  9. Kajal KapurAugust 1, 2013 at 2:44 AM

    A story in a single sentence is really commendable. I'm impressed too :) Good work!

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    1. sugandhaAugust 1, 2013 at 10:59 PM

      Thank you so much...I am so glad with all the appreciation.

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  10. Richa SinghAugust 1, 2013 at 9:59 PM

    Sahi! You tried both and a story in a single sentence! You did it man! WOW!

    Richa

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    1. sugandhaAugust 1, 2013 at 10:59 PM

      Thank you Richa...coming from you i take it as a compliment :)

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  11. UnknownAugust 2, 2013 at 5:12 AM

    You did an amazing job on both!! Brilliant!!

    Kathy
    http://gigglingtruckerswife.blogspot.com

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  12. AnonymousAugust 2, 2013 at 6:39 AM

    Great!........Loved both

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  13. UnknownAugust 2, 2013 at 1:16 PM

    Yes..loosing a dog is not easy...I am suprised you were able to put it in words...great work

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  14. AnonymousAugust 3, 2013 at 2:15 PM

    Nice work :)

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  15. MeAugust 4, 2013 at 1:32 PM

    Damn cool Sugandha!!!! I liked both :D
    What an ending girl :D

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  16. RatAugust 12, 2013 at 9:35 PM

    wonderfully carved.. one sentence 55ers. thats cool :)

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  17. AnonymousAugust 12, 2013 at 10:55 PM

    Hey Sugandha, thumbs up for writing so beautifully:)

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