Oct 22, 2013

Party - 100 words on Saturday

They had called for a party. All dressed up in best clothes, wore party caps and gathered there at sharp eight.
I looked at each of them and saw how nice they looked. They smiled and nodded when our eyes met. Some of them I saw for the first time, maybe they were new comer, or I had simply not noticed them. There were few who were missing.

I knew it was my last day there. My doctors had given up on me and as per my last wish; the hospital had organized a party for all fellow cancer patients.



100 Words on Saturday - Write Tribe

This post is written on the prompt "I knew it was my last day there".
I intended to write a happy post, but in the end, dedicated it to young cancer patients. This is a piece of fiction.
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29 comments:

  1. sulekkhaOctober 22, 2013 at 5:08 PM

    Sad, in a perfect world there would be no suffering.

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  2. AnonymousOctober 22, 2013 at 5:19 PM

    It was brave of this character to do it. I have lost a loved one to Cancer and I know how scary this whole thing is....:(

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    1. sugandhaOctober 22, 2013 at 9:28 PM

      :( I didnt intend to make anyone sad, but it so happened.

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  3. Shilpa GargOctober 22, 2013 at 9:41 PM

    Oh! Sad!
    But loved your take on the prompt! Very different! :)

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  4. UnknownOctober 22, 2013 at 9:59 PM

    Wow very sad, but nice writing. And thanks for sharing write tribe. I found a new writing motivation :)

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  5. the little princessOctober 22, 2013 at 11:38 PM

    how sad.. takes courage to do that..

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  6. RajlakshmiOctober 23, 2013 at 3:09 PM

    awww beautiful post

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  7. KParthasarathiOctober 23, 2013 at 3:13 PM

    A morbid story.Not all can summon such courage to take leave in this fashion.But it was different and after all a tale.

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  8. AnonymousOctober 24, 2013 at 12:29 AM

    sad and touching ... :(

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  9. Vishal BheerooOctober 24, 2013 at 1:38 PM

    Beautifully written but sad as well. Hope, she reaches unblemished happiness in her new world.

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  10. SeetaOctober 24, 2013 at 1:49 PM

    Very well written... a sad topic but unfortunately a reality today :|

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  11. RatOctober 24, 2013 at 3:48 PM

    thats sad. good writeup

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  12. Amazing wonders in my lifeOctober 24, 2013 at 5:02 PM

    I lost one of my friend who was suffering from cancer.... Ur post reminded of him.. His last few words before I left from there was... I wish I had few more days with me

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  13. Anita SabatOctober 24, 2013 at 5:06 PM

    Sugandha, Really well-written! Sad but true...
    It hits the reader! We get to know why a few were missing & about the newcomers...
    Thanks for the nice prompt you suggested. Even I wrote 100 words on it! :)

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  14. ObsessivemomOctober 25, 2013 at 2:40 PM

    Leaving on a happy note.. How many are brave enough to do this?

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    1. sugandhaOctober 25, 2013 at 10:54 PM

      Dont know...but lets hope no one has to leave this world like this :(

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  15. AnonymousOctober 29, 2013 at 8:05 AM

    A bitter reality... put up very nicely
    ...and thanks for suggesting such wonderful prompt!

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  16. UnknownOctober 29, 2013 at 6:24 PM

    Sad but a totally touching story sugandha.... well done !!

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