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Mar 24, 2014

The greatest love...

He prided himself with his skill to open strangest locks. Trained by local goons, his skill was now an asset to the country.
So when he discovered Sally’s little box with a cute heart shape lock, he set out to his task. 

He tried to open it for hours. She at last found him, stepped in front and used her little hairpin instead of the key and it opened. Letters from her parents stored inside.

She snapped the box shut saying “the greatest love of all is of parents, and it is so strong that no one can unlock it”.
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This post is a part of Write Over the Weekend, an initiative for Indian Bloggers by BlogAdda.

Linking it to Write Tribe's 100 words on Saturday

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Also, check out the post by a non-blogger who penned down her feeling.
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24 comments:

  1. PixieMarch 24, 2014 at 12:34 AM

    oh yes!! you have said it beautifully!! :)

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  2. ShivaMarch 24, 2014 at 9:26 AM

    so true.... dat is d first form of love that touches our lives

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  3. Sreeja PraveenMarch 24, 2014 at 10:53 AM

    So true, that is ! and yes, no one can unlock it !!! Well written, Sugandha :)

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  4. Shilpa GargMarch 24, 2014 at 11:51 AM

    Lovely!! And loved that heart shaped lock too!

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  5. Swathi ShenoyMarch 24, 2014 at 2:21 PM

    True :) Nothing can beat parents' love :)

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  6. AnonymousMarch 24, 2014 at 5:57 PM

    Lovely take on the prompt..and nice linked to both the prompts.

    Parents' love is indeed the greatest love of all!

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  7. AnonymousMarch 24, 2014 at 9:32 PM

    Treasure of love. Beautifully woven and crisp:)

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  8. UnknownMarch 25, 2014 at 4:39 AM

    What a lovely treasure. I love what you did with this prompt! ♥

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  9. KParthasarathiMarch 25, 2014 at 1:40 PM

    You have excelled in 100 words to bring out a story on parents love

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  10. NabanitaMarch 25, 2014 at 4:26 PM

    Oh yes! I agree and yes the love for parents is the greatest gift for us!

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  11. RajlakshmiMarch 25, 2014 at 5:42 PM

    that's beautiful indeed :)

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  12. AnonymousMarch 26, 2014 at 7:44 AM

    That's a very sweet story and a great way to combine two prompts

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  13. RatMarch 26, 2014 at 6:13 PM

    well presented. lovely :)

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  14. Midnight scribblesMarch 26, 2014 at 10:17 PM

    nicely combined the two, greatest love that of parents :D No one can indeed unlock that!

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  15. Vishal BheerooMarch 28, 2014 at 11:44 AM

    An absolute delight to read. A treasure for life:)
    http://vishalbheeroo.wordpress.com/2014/03/23/wow-last-cigarette-and-1-40-a-m-local/

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  16. UnknownMarch 28, 2014 at 5:33 PM

    Simple makes it beautiful!! Nice take on two prompts. priya- http://pencilstripes.blogspot.com/2014/03/a-serene-sunday.html

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