Part of my 30 part story, continued from Day 14 - Depression
Parting from ones loved ones is always a tender moment but when it is post marriage, it is really a painful one.
Parting from ones loved ones is always a tender moment but when it is post marriage, it is really a painful one.
Deepti tried to control her tears,
but they seemed to have a mind of their own. She dabbed her eyes as she hugged
her mother hard. She sobbed when her aunts blessed her. Patiently standing by
her side, Harsh tried to compose her, but she couldn’t stop.
Priya came ahead. She wiped the
tears of her cheek, and hugged her friend. She whispered good wishes and helped
her get in the car. Even in that moment of parting with her family, Deepti
looked at Priya and wondered how weak she looked.
Next few days were highly busy in
Deepti’s life. Dinners and lunches at relatives and friends, and then a
honeymoon gave Deepti no time to think of anything else. Harsh was doing all
that a good husband would. He attended all the invitations without throwing a fit;
he helped her when she got tired. He pampered her thoroughly during their
honeymoon. He was as good as one could be. Deepti thought to herself that she
might have had a wrong opinion about Harsh. He was well travelled, he had
really wide knowledge, it maybe wasn’t completely wrong that he wanted to
improve her a bit.
Once back, Deepti asked Harsh if it was okay
to join her office back and he simply replied that it was completely okay with
him if she could manage the house and work both. She happily agreed. It was
after a couple of weeks when Harsh one day asked her about her friends.
She suddenly felt guilty that she
was so busy in her own life that she forgot about Priya. She asked Harsh if he
was okay with spending the evening by himself. He happily agreed. She picked up
the phone and called up Priya. After hanging up, on impulse she called up
Ritika and Shriya too.
Wednesday 8 pm, girls decided to meet up.
Harsh seems to be a good guy now.... or is it a facade?
ReplyDeleteWaiting for the girls to meet up!
Lets see Shilpa. Maybe he isnt a bad guy.
DeleteThe least few parts I read in a jiffy. Listen I need to know more about priya. Poor girl man!
ReplyDeleteRicha
Coming up madam...
DeleteI like your idea of giving insights into relationships through the use of stories, both fiction and non-fiction. This is a great way to help people examine their own relationships. Thanks!
ReplyDeleteThank you for your lovely words Tracy :)
DeleteIs this going to part of a book that you are writing. You definitely have a talent.
ReplyDeleteI agree with Tracy, great way of showing people that they are not alone.
ReplyDeleteThanks Kama...these are really kind words.
DeleteI love how you show your reader what the characters are like. Your words paint a vibrant picture and keep the reader enchanted and engaged. I look forward to see what happens next!
ReplyDeleteKathy my dear...and I love the way you keep encouraging to go ahead and pour the heart out.
Deletethe character is flowing. waiting to watch the how priya meets with her friends and manages both
ReplyDeleteSee it today...
DeleteI really want Harsh to be a good guy!! heh! :D
ReplyDeleteLets see..I want too
DeleteInteresting story reflecting the reality of life.
ReplyDeleteHmmm...thanks
DeleteAll is well...or so it seems ?... :)
ReplyDeleteMaybe, maybe not...
DeleteSo far Harsh is just the perfect partner!
ReplyDeleteYes he is...
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