Oh! I love him.
I said. Yeah! I love him too. My
friend shrieked too, echoing my words.
It was hot, humid Sunday and we were waiting for our
turn in front of the ticket counter. The ticket vendor handed over the tickets
and said Wow! I love him.
This post is a part of Write Over the Weekend, an initiative for Indian Bloggers by BlogAdda. We give out themes for creative writing each weekend for Indian bloggers.
Wow! I love him too! <3 <3
ReplyDeleteWho doesn't love him?! :D
ReplyDeleteI don't like him too much but I like how you use 55 words to form a fiction :)
ReplyDeleteI am surprised that you don't, but thank you for liking the fiction.
DeleteWow! I love him too :)
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Delete:) nice idea....do love him...catcing up.after a bit of a break.
ReplyDeleteGreat :)
DeleteSomething is not right about the sentence where you bring in the ticket vendor. Unfortunately I can't point out what, but while reading it feels different.
ReplyDeleteHmmm...I tried reading it...lets see if someone else points it out
DeleteLove him too....
ReplyDelete:)
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