Oct 25, 2013

My love...

Oh those horses were so beautiful. And those landscapes, they were breathtaking. There I was, I was that horseman and fell in love with him. I extended my hand and touched him, traced his smooth jaw and patted his horse.

And then I turned the page and fell in love with a new page again.

The 55 fiction is based on the above photo prompt provided by Vidya Suri on Write Tribe.


55 on Friday #WriteTribe

50 comments:

  1. And then I turned the page and fell in love with a new page again.

    liked this line.

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  2. Aha! That's so beautiful!! The love for books is such that!!
    Good one for the prompt, Sugandha :)

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  3. LoL Sugandha,

    Nice one for today's prompt. I think I'll try to join this writing prompt too. I also wrote for Five Minute Friday prompt today. Read more about it on my blog.


    BTW, a small advice, if you don't mind - it's difficult to read the text due to the background on this blog. I think you should change it. Try some other colors.
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    1. Thanks :) I'll see what best I can do for this one.

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  4. Oh the many love affairs I've had with a good book!

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  5. nicely expressed in short 55 words.

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  6. Love expressed in 55 words. :)

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  7. Beautiful Sugandha! I too fall in love each time I turn the page over!

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  8. This is brilliant and exactly why I love to read stories so much. Well done!! It is why my mind and heart lingers with the characters long after I have read the last words. It is also what entices me to read again and again, sometimes the same loved books over and over. You nailed it! ♥

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  9. wonderful imaginative!! getting lost in a book is something only a booklover can understand!

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  10. Ah yes.....the wonderful feeling of falling in love with a book....can so relate to that! :)

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  11. Beautiful ~ so effectively captured in a short span.

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  12. That's beautiful :)
    I loved how well you have recreated the scene and made me fall in love with your story! :)

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  13. Ha! perfect! It happens all the time to me!

    Richa

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  14. Lol..The Love was all with the Pages.. :P
    Very Nicely Written.. . :D

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  15. Ah! Another book-lover like me! Fell in love again! :)
    Nice as usual, Sugandha!

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  16. I love books and can totally relate to the 'falling in love with the pages' part of this story :)
    Beautifully written.

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  17. Simple and just beautiful! :) :)

    http://howdypancakes.blogspot.in/

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  18. Ah! that was so beautiful (:
    55 flash bang on for the prompt and (using the adjective again) so beautiful (:

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  19. A crisp 55er,e pretty nice!

    Cheers!
    Indigenou

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  20. That was lovely! :) I was wondering if anyone would refer the horse's picture on the page.. :P

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  21. Ah! Thats the privilege that only book lovers can enjoy...
    nice!

    Please follow the link to read mine:
    http://locomente.blogspot.in/2013/10/those-landmark-days.html

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  22. Isn't that ever so true, each story has a new hero to fall in love with. Nice take on the prompt.

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  23. Cldn't be better than that:)

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