He had come to talk to her for the moment they shared. He had felt something special and wanted to ask if she felt the same. He heard her talking and paused. She said “It was just bliss”. He mistook it for “It was just a kiss”.
He thought he got his answer and left.
This post is a part of Write Over the Weekend, an initiative for Indian Bloggers by BlogAdda
This weeks prompt -
Enjoyed reading. Thank god it was not a miss :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Nischala
DeleteBliss and kiss. nice reading yr F-55er.
ReplyDeleteThanks Kalpana
DeleteNice 55er. Sad when people jump to conclusions so quickly.
ReplyDeletedropping by from the WoW prompt.
Yeah...Thank you Suzy
DeleteSuch a nice short story with great effect
ReplyDeleteThanks :)
DeleteWow! That's a nice one for the prompt! :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Shilpa
DeleteNice take on the prompt, interesting how similar sounding words can make a world of difference when used interchangeably, right!!!
ReplyDeleteThanks Jairam
DeleteHahaha...I feel bad for the poor guy :P
ReplyDeleteHahaha
DeleteAwww this must be something later huh? :D :D
ReplyDeleteRicha
?? This wasn't part of the story...
Delete55 words...well written :) poor chap though :(
ReplyDeleteLol :) thank you
Deleteyou are quite good in 55Fiction :) good one again
ReplyDeleteThank you :)
Deletegreat entry for the WOW prompt
ReplyDeletehttp://amarnaik.wordpress.com/2013/10/06/confusion-created-as-a-result-of-the-miscommunication/
Thanks Amarnaik
DeleteThe last line makes me sad. :) But a great post.
ReplyDeleteThanks Sakshi
Deletewonderful 55er :)
ReplyDeleteOne simple word heard wrong and a love story ended . sad =(
ReplyDeleteLovely 55er ! :-)
:( life is like that
DeleteThanks
A blissful kiss....nice post
ReplyDeleteWell... I almost wished he had said, 'Beg your pardon?'
ReplyDeleteArvind Passey
www.passey.info
:D I wish too
DeleteBliss and Kiss..Simple and Lovely in 55.. :)
ReplyDeleteGood take on the prompt. :)
ReplyDeleteOh! Bechara! :P
ReplyDelete:P What can I say
DeleteNow that's a really sad ending to the bliss... :P
ReplyDeleteye bahut bura hua. Ab wo kahan nayi girlfriend dhhondhta firega.... :'(
ReplyDeleteBtw, a very good 55er sugandha
Lol :)
Deletepoor chap!
ReplyDeleteBtw, nice 55er sugandha!
Hahaha :)
DeleteWhy do these guys always hear everything upside down?
ReplyDelete-Nice take on the prompt! :)
That's why they are boys. Thank you :)
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