So many sagas unheard.
So many songs unsung,
So many minutes unloved.
If only you were here,
I’d tell you what you mean to me.
If only you were here,
I’d share my dreams and fantasy.
Each day I miss you,
Every night I cry.
If only I knew,
While I continue to try.
The distance between us,
Cannot be measured in miles,
Life and death did not part,
But I couldn’t control your heart.
If only you remained,
I’d tell you no lies.
If only you were here,
I’d give you my life.
(My first attempt at a poem, written in one go without editing, ending only at 99 words...written for Write Tribe 100 words on saturday. Based on the prompt "If only you were here"
First attempt? It's beautiful...
ReplyDeleteYes Shilpa...thank you
DeleteThis is simply beautiful Sugandha...
ReplyDeleteFirst attempt and superbly done...at least better than what I tried with this prompt :) Thanks Sugandha!
ReplyDeleteAwesome attempt, more so given that this is your first poem !!!
ReplyDelete1st attempt?? It is a fab first attempt! Beautiful expression!
ReplyDelete:) Thanks Shilpa
DeleteReally good one, Sugandha :)
ReplyDeleteSo simple, yet so profound !
Keep going !
Thank you Sreeja.
DeleteAwesomely beautiful, poem. It's a gem:)
ReplyDeleteThis is so beautiful!
ReplyDeleteThank you Shreesha :)
DeleteFirst attempt????
ReplyDeleteawesome attempt :)
and my fav. line in the poem is
The distance between us,
Cannot be measured in miles,
Thank you Karanvir...
DeleteLovely.... :)
ReplyDeleteYour first attempt is indeed beautiful. :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Jyoti :)
DeleteHeart warming it is !! The longing of a broken heart.. well penned Sugandha
ReplyDeleteThank you Jyotsna :)
DeleteWow Sugandha..First Attempt and that too at one go..Simply Superb.. :)
ReplyDeleteThank You :)
Deletelovely!
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